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3667 No. 3667 ID: 43ab9163
What do you think?????
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>> No. 3668 ID: 43ab9163
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It looks like Humikane's style
>> No. 3676 ID: 782c7972
no it doesn't
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Her jacket needs some improvement, especially at the waist. It doesn't look good when her panties are completely exposed at the front like that.
>> No. 3678 ID: db47d245
Well, but I'm trying!!!!!
I know, but is my second work!!! I did it in Illustrator.
In time I'll do my best, OK?
>> No. 3680 ID: f703c9c2
>>3678

Don't take things like >>3676 too harshly. Your art looks fine to me (far better than anything I could make myself), and it can only improve with time.

As for criticism, the things which stand out the most to me are the outlines on the face (left side in particular), and the chest area. Unfortunately, since I'm not an artist, I can't really explain what needs to be changed. All I can say is find an artist you like and compare your lines to his. I've heard that's a pretty good way to improve. It's kind of vague, but I hope that helps.

Keep up the good work.
>> No. 3690 ID: dc33d0a8
Thank you very much!!
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